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by Faizah from Scotland | in writing, fiction

(Its lunch time and two best friends are talking about what they want to eat.)

Rose: Shall we get a cheese and pickle pizza from Dominoes today?

Bella: No, I'm not hungry

Rose: (disappointed) Oh ok!

(Rose walks off )

(Bella sits down to eat an apple)

15 minutes later

(Rose flings her self down beside Bella)

Rose: It's a shame you didn't come with us, the pizza was scrumptious

Bella: (down) Oh that's nice

Rose: (worried) Are you ok? You have been acting strange all day!

Bella: (upset) Yeah just fine

Rose: Come on you call tell me!

Bella: No! It's nothing

Rose: (knowing look) Uha!

Bella: (sighs, wary) It's just.....

Silence

Am I fat?

Rose: (Laughing) No! Whatever makes you say that?

Bella: (nervous) You!

Rose: (shocked) ME!

Bella: (Nervous) Y...yeh, I...I heard you say it to Rebecca

Rose: (laughing) No, no, I was talking about my cat Bells. The one I got last week. I am sorry Bella, you're not fat at all.

Bella: (revealed) Really?

Rose: (laughing, joking) Really

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The story is about a girl asking her friends about her appearance. What inspired me is that every girl wants to know the truth about how she looks and the reply that friends give.

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